Monday, October 24, 2005

Bloggers book ?

Someone wanted a beginning to a story and to Prove Im not an Ignoramus .... I scribbled the following - Now its up to someone else to take the story over and write the next chapter....
Let me know who has it so i can keep tabs on it pls .....It could be fun.

"So this is who all the fuss is about" thought Dave as he sidled up to the crowded table in the Smokey bar just off Main, on a miserable Friday evening. She stood near the head of the table in the top corner surrounded by a throng of male would be admirers. She was definitely a looker he decided... Tall, good figure and a head of curly hair that drew attention to her clear eyes and wide smile. His mates hadn't even noticed his entrance - so wrapped up were they in whatever it was she was saying...

He turned to the bar tender and asked for a beer. When it eventually arrived he took a long pull at it still keeping his eyes on the woman in the corner that seemed to hold his mates as a captive audience. Every few minutes there was an approving roar of laughter that indicated that they were still mesmerized by her Cobra - like enchantment.

This was a rarity in this neck of the woods. These were the same guys that sat around the same table every Friday and told the same type of jokes and anecdotes week in and week out.... It wasn't often that a newcomer was admitted to their ranks and even more seldom was it that a newcomer could commandeer so much attention. It wasn't that she was stunningly beautiful or provocatively dressed, it seemed to be that she was just really confident and possessed a natural inner strength that drew people to her. This was the second Friday evening she had spent amongst the guys in the corner. She had just breezed in the previous Friday evening and sort of taken hold of them without so much as a single protestation.

Having not been in town the previous week , I had heard all about her from the group during the week. It was Jessy this .... and Jessy that.... "Who the hell is Jessy ? " I kept asking myself . It was time to find out he thought pushing himself away from the counter ....

2 Comments:

At 11:15 AM, Blogger BUDDESS said...

I am taking it first if you all don't mind. Will publish my section shortly on my blog.

 
At 12:48 PM, Blogger BUDDESS said...

I'm done. Have a look and carry on. Could turn out to be fun.

 

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